http://scionoflorelei.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] scionoflorelei.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] abyssianmelody 2009-01-06 05:45 pm (UTC)

Luke simply did as he was told; his strikes were better this time around, though obviously the Commandant was still able to parry any and all of his attacks. Still... this was exciting; Luke was able to put everything he was into something, without having to worry about being perfect or being told by someone else; he wanted to be praised by this man.

He certainly wasn't getting any praise from his father.

Continuing, a smile crossed Luke's face as he continued. This was fun.

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